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How to Write a Story

By Inu-Pup

        For all you aspiring young authors, and even old pros, who are looking for a way to improve your skills, this is for you. In this manual Iím relying on my own experience as an author and as an avid reader. First Iíll start with the five major problems faced by most authors.

1. Writing a Beginning. The most remembered part of a story is the beginning and the end. The beginning sets the mood for the rest of the story. If you start off on the wrong foot, readers might just put your story down and look for a different one.

2. Writing an Ending. For a reader, the ending of a good book is an action-packed tragedy. When was the last time you read a good novel and wanted it to end? A good long story can be an enjoyable thing, but as a writer, you want to be able to end it.

3. Descriptions. Long boring paragraphs filled with the descriptions of characters and places donít make for good reading. In small doses, a well-described scene can help to enhance your story, but only in tiny fragments.

4. Rushing. When you are writing a story that your heart is really in, it can be hard to slow down, but it is kinder to your story and your readers not to get ahead of yourself.

5. Planning your Plot. Personally I find this the hardest of all five. ďWhat should happen next?Ē Plot problems and rushing often go hand in hand.

        Now that you know of the dangers down the road, itís time to tell you of the tools of the trade. Now donít laugh, I like to be thorough!

1. Either a computer or a pencil and paper.

2. A Thesaurus. It can really help if you just canít think of the right word.

3. Other stories. Reading other authorsí work can help you to see the flaws and perfections in your own writing.

4. You! The story isnít going to write itself.

        To begin writing your story, you first have to have some idea of what is going to happen. What I like to do first is to jot down a short one-paragraph outline of a plot. Hereís one of mine for an example:

        Michael = a dragon hiding in the human world. Can transform into a more human-like appearance. Teams up with twins, Rayne and Flaime (girls). Bad guy (name?) is hunting down the last of the dragons. Possibly murdered Rayne and Flaimeís missing father. Rayne and Flaime descended from (name?) some kind of dragon allies. Bad guy defeated, Michael re-enters the magical realm, mission accomplished.

        Not everything is laid out, there is some wiggle room incase a creative streak hits me during the writing process, but it has an ending planned out to avoid the dreaded Writerís Block. This plot/outline is for a fictional action story, but the general idea can be used for any type of writing. Itís similar to a thesis statement in non-fiction writing.

        After all the work of planning out the story, itís time to use those creative thoughts and start the beginning. The beginning is the foundation of a story. Making a good impression with a memorable beginning is crucial to any story. So, time to think. What is the one thing that stays with a story from start to finish? The Main Character. Going back to our summary example, itís pretty obvious that Michael is my main character. I should probably start by introducing him to the readers. There are many different styles writers use, but mine is to start off by showing the readers what makes my main character tick. I donít even write his name yet, but I mold out a character that almost every reader can relate to. I want to make it seem as if this is a story that might just happen to the readers themselves. Then I start sneaking in the rest of the details about him. What I mean by this is:

        Yawning, Michael ran his fingers through his shaggy brown hair before he shuffled out of bed and down the steps for breakfast.

Instead of:

Michael had shaggy brown hair.

There are a few exceptions, but not many. Normally itís best to try to avoid the second example as much as possible. This goes for describing places too. The first example is much better than:

Michael lived in a two-story house. His bedroom was upstairs.

        But if, letís say, Michael was on an airplane for the first time, that would be a good spot for a short two or three sentence description of the city he was flying into, or maybe a beautiful tropical sunset on the horizon. But normally Iíd have to introduce him before I stuck him on a plane.

Now that the Main Character has been introduced, we need to introduce the Secondary Characters. Here itís a little less clear-cut on whether itís okay to have a description of the character or sneak the description into the story. Normally I try to sneak the details in anyway.

Since I never finished that story with Michael and the twins, I wonít continue to take you on that particular journey. Hopefully you have what you need to get your story started, and you have what you need to finish it. So itís time to talk about the annoying speed bump called Writerís Block.

Iíve talked about it a few times before, and hopefully some of my tips will save you from a particularly nasty case of it, but it does happen. So now Iíll share some ways you can free yourself from Writerís Block.

1. Check your summary.

2. Reread your story so far.

3. Edit it. See if there are some things that you can change to make it better.

4. Take a break. Sometimes the best thing is to stop.

        This method has helped me in the short time Iíve been a writer, and it should help you too.
The last thing in writing a story is what you do once youíre done. It helps to go back and reread everything. Most likely youíve grown as a writer during the process and you can find parts in the beginning that now seem hasty and foolish to you. Once youíve edited your story many times over, find a couple of friends who will read your story too. Donít take their criticisms to heart, but always consider them. Almost any criticism can be used to make your writing better. Thatís what itís meant for.

        Youíve finished the guide, so the only thing left for you to do is to get started on your own story.
I couldn't find a way to put this in the tutorial section so it's going here.

At anyrate, there is a brand new, never before seen Chapter 2! [link]

It is all about characters!

Hate Mary Sues? Having trouble getting your characters to make the plot work without it getting awkward? Do you just want another boost up on your way to becoming the next Messiah of the Literary World?!

Then click the link! ^^ [link]
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All-Bark-No-Bite Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

This is a really great help for me. I like how this is thorough and describes all of the components needed to make a good story, and how to go about that. It will definately aid me on my literary adventures!

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AnimePandaRionna Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Student Interface Designer
I have a question.. how do you publish a literature story on DA? I currently have a tablet and I have a request from someone which I really need to complete. Sooo how do you make a story on DA?
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inu-pup Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
To be honest, so much has changed here on this site, I couldn't honestly tell you. I hope you figured it out though!
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AnimePandaRionna Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Student Interface Designer
PS. Im on my Tablet for the next few “months", because my computer broke, and I don't have the notepad (Or the text-thing)..
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Dudet19 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Please read one of my journal entries and tell me what you think about my story so far...your opinion would be greatly appreciated...I just need to know what another rioter thinks about my writing :)
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inu-pup Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
Well, I'm sorry to decline you but I'm busy with college right now. However, there is a website online, called StoryWrite. There is a group on there called S a R, Serious about Reviews. Join Story Write, and ask to be added to S a R. As long as you read other people's stories every week, They will read yours. And it will be more than just one person reading it a week too. :) Would that be more helpful?
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Dudet19 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's really short
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Rascal2012 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
I came up with a great story but then I found a already published story that has similarities, but the story is from Japan and I am in America so what should I do ,ps there are differences in the storys though
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inu-pup Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
Well, first off, I'd say write it anyway. If anything, it'll be good practice. Second, make sure that there are differences. I wouldn't even read the story if I were you, just so you can make sure that you aren't being influenced in your thinking by this other story.

Something to remember, there are a lot of stories out there, already published, that have similarities with each other. There are common themes in literature. This isn't a bad thing. You just need to be aware that there are stories out there that are similar to your story. However, your characters should be originally yours, with their own drives and motivations and their own stories that should, when all added together, make your story unique to you. Everyone has a different voice and view point. You just have to make sure that there is enough of yours in the story so that it doesn't sound like a copy of this other story.
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Rascal2012 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
Thanks for the help!
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shadowblades55 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Intresting nothing really new but you made me remember the basics thank you. got to get started on my story board now.
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inu-pup Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
Yeah, I was just focusing on the Basics in this one. Re-familiarizing yourself with those sure as heck helps. If you're more advanced, writing out what you think are the basics, like to teach someone how to write a story, that sure as heck helps too.
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Tamara127 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
Thank you so-freankin'-much!!! I can't draw anyways, but if I never start, I never will be able to draw xD
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inu-pup Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
Exactly. You'll never learn Spanish if you never take a class, you'd have never learned to walk if you didn't try and fall right back down as a baby, and you'll never learn to draw if you never practice. :) Have fun.
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ezzmemai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011
sorry but how do you write a story on deviantart??? do you have to be a premium member?
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inu-pup Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
oh, no. you just write up your snippet, go to submit art, write in your title, and then in the category, select literature, and choose what category your story falls under from there. Then you'll have click upload and upload the story file. Word doc works well, though you can do it with other files too. If that doesn't work, you can select "Add Text" and copy and paste from your story to the text box that will open up.

I think that should be all of it. Though you've likely figured it out by now, since I reply to everything extremely late.
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ezzmemai Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
thanks!!!! ;D
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inu-pup Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
Not a prob!
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ashleyamaya Featured By Owner May 23, 2011
Thanks for this! I hope it helps with my writing styles and teaches me some new tricks! >:D
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inu-pup Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
:D I hope you can get something from it. The more you read the better your writing will be. That's my biggest trick.
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LeslejaMaker12 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Heey, I have a question. Not about how to write a story, but how did you do this. I mean you didn't describe it in the discription but in you're upload and........damn. How did you write down these tips?

Sorry if you don't understand.

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inu-pup Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
Oh, well, it was an assignment for my homeschool freshman english class. I just sat down and thought what I would like to have told myself when I first started writing lame little fanfictions or weird little blips of novels I wanted but never wrote. I don't know how I wrote it. I guess I tried my best to make sure that I didn't get technical or hard to understand, like I was writing to a friend. I remember that at that point of my writing career I was really proud of having that style and that voice in my works. Did that answer your question?
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LeslejaMaker12 Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
..............................eh....no. I meant how you put in on DA. How did you upload it?

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inu-pup Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
oh, click submit art, put in your title, for something with words choose literature for your category and pick what category. Then you can upload the word doc file, or whatever writing file you use, or you can select upload text and copy and paste the words from your word doc to the text box that will pop up. That should be the gist, I think.
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LeslejaMaker12 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, thnx :D

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inu-pup Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
No problemo.
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roubinatd Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
hi this really helped me. my teacher dosent get my descriptive writing and i have a romance paper due monday any tips?
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inu-pup Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
Well, I hope you did well, because I'm replying super late. My tip would be to not get bogged down with description, and to do a lot of sneaking it in like I described if you do have a lot of scene and character descriptions if you just can't live without. You do have to write for yourself enough so that you can be excited about what you write, but remember that you have to let the reader have a chance to get into the story too. Most of writing is about balance. Just play around with it and remember that high school doesn't last forever.
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roubinatd Featured By Owner May 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks XD
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hollyberrypie Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2010   Writer
whoa...thanks! that REALLY helps a lot. hahaha.
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inu-pup Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2010
Hey, no problem! Actually helped me just to write down some tips. Glad it helped you too.
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x--Lurid--x Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Hey,
Great tutorial! Its really useful and descriptive. Do you mind if I add it as a link to [link] ? Just to help more people find it?
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inu-pup Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010
I don't know if you remember me. Back in october of 2009 you asked to add a tutorial I wrote "How to Write a Story" as a link in your "Ultimate Writing Guide"

Well I've just in the past few days written a sequel to my HowTo about Characters, dealing in how to create good ones, avoid Mary Sues, Character psychology and Character development. Didn't know if you would be interested in that.


[link]
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x--Lurid--x Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Alrighty! I will add it super soon! = D

~Yumi~
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inu-pup Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010
Thank you kindly ^^
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inu-pup Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2009
omigawd, you can so totally add it as a link! I'd be so honored!
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x--Lurid--x Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yay ^_^
Thanks! I hope it helps more people find it!
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The-Doll-Factory Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008
"Michael ran his fingers through his shaggy brown hair before he shuffled out of bed and down the steps for breakfast. Instead of:
Michael had shaggy brown hair."

That was very helpfull, I actually didn't think of this before. I think that it is good that you wrote all this, because a lot of people forget about the details I think, at least for the beginners :D
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inu-pup Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008
^^ Thanks for the feed back. It was a really fun thing to write. Really kinda simple how-to though.
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The-Doll-Factory Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008
You're welcome :hug:
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1likeme Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2008
yay!
you helped me alot=D
thanks for doing this=D
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inu-pup Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2008
^^ seriously. No prob. :D truth be told, writing this was a school assignment.
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1likeme Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2008
really?
what grade did you get?
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inu-pup Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008
I think I got a A-. I dunno. It was all the way back in freshman year. *tis a senior now*
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Ambsi Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2008
I think this is going to be really useful :D That Thesaurus thing sounds really handy and the part about sneaking in details... I've never really thought about that before.
So :+fav:
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inu-pup Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2008
Well I'm glad it might help.
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WolvesStoleMyPurse Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2007
I really needed some idea on how to advance from beyond the little plot bunny in my head. Thanks so much for the help!
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inu-pup Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2007
No problem. Hope this helps.
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kellroxursox Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2007
thanks this is really going to help with my story!
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inu-pup Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2007
welcome! I had fun writing it. Glad to know it's being used by ppl.
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